A Place Where the Birds Still Sing

[littlewriter]

Thanks in advance for any thoughts or feedback!

With the power to draw other worlds, a young artist must protect her magic from the dark forces that seek to exploit it just as it begins to grow. With the help of an intriguing actor who can shift into other people, they battle those that seek to destroy them and their world. #ya

[heatheranne]

This sounds really cool! I want to know why drawing other worlds is a power that much be protected?

[ikmar]

Hi littlewriter

I'm confused. So the power is simply to draw other worlds? Like being able to draw other places on Earth she's never been to? And dark forces (which is overly generic) will use that? how?

Yes, this makes me ask a lot of questions, but I need more specifics to pique my interest.

The focus here is also a little MG'ish -- child against dark forces -- YA tends to make the focus more personable. e.g. did Katnis step up to fight the government or save her sister?

And I'd add the MC's age.